Typography

What do you think of my anti fur poster for College?

I decided to make a typography anti fur poster, http://s159.photobucket.com/albums/t150/MarthaMay1717/?action=view&current=Picture18.png what do you think? and what should i change? thanks!

Public Comments

1. That is amazing and i totally think FUR is overrated! Why would you kill such innocent animals!!!
2. Well it's cluttered and not really that attention grabbing. Plus it's kind of misinformative because most furs are grown in fur farms, and the remainder of the meat is used in other products (usually animal food but sometimes human meats also). Very few animals are hunted for their fur anymore.
3. I like it, maybe add some more color to it ? To make it more intriguing.
4. i think its awesome! good job!
5. Luv it! Maybe make the letters which make the face of the animal mean something like a sentence or something - but I really like it!
6. cool!
7. i love it! http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Asm_jNCkhGWucXgj6_UnT2rsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20090415100635AA7wrWW
8. looks really good and looks as though you really thought about it. =) thanks for answering mine too x
9. Baby seals aren't shot, they are clubbed.
10. The gun is fantastic, well done. The seal could use some help. It took me wayyy too long to figure out that those "i"s were supposed to be whiskers (I first thought they were some kind of weird buck teeth) so I would recommend either leaving them off or moving them up so that the serif on top of the I is within the seal face. They way they are now is distracting the eye from the rest of the poster. Also, move some of the letter jumble in the seal towards the letters forming the boarder. The seal looks oddly outlined, I'd recommend making it look more incorporated with the rest of the filled in head. Overall though, nice job! I like the highlighting you did with the jumbled letters going down his neck.
11. I love it! good job and good cause!
12. I think it's cluttered and not attention grabbing at all. All I see is suffer and why written all over. And a gun? Why not show a photo of an animal trapped in one of those cages that hunters use? Oh and yes, people do hunt and trap for fur still. I just read the NYS guidelines for hunting and trapping for fur. Anyways, the message does not get across in this poster. Sure it looks nice, but I didn't even realize a seal was in the poster until another commenter said so.
13. wow that's really great!
14. I really like it! I chose Anti-fur for my English speech, and I totally agree with you! I think its great the way it is! (:
15. Hahah I thought it said "ant fur" and I was like "Ants have fur?" No, but really. LOVES it.
16. check out these fur bikinis http://WorldSwimwear.com I'm kidding. I think your poster is awesome.. However, it does require people to read, and you know how hard it is to get a message across when people have to read it.